My feeling

My feeling to you every time
You read only feeling right time
My life bound to You dear
This means you in my life
Since you come  my life
Every day I spent  your life
This is truth, No meaning without you  this life
I want to you hold so in my life
This life want to live with your life
My love is for you in the life
You can't see still this is the point
At the right time you can see my feeling 
You are my life, This is our life

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Life means so much to different souls.
Mine is not defined by another person, but it does involve other people being in it.
This shows a relationship as being a defining factor in a person's life.
However, life continues even when a person exits our lives--it changes and becomes different.
There's emotion here.

[Jonathan Wiles]

Beautiful composition. Lives are beautiful. This poem creates the thankfulness of living and the value of others' lives.

Best wishes,
Aaliyah

[Celie Rose]

Enjoyed reading your poem.
Life is love and love is life.
Nicely expressed and written.
"You can't see still this is the point
At the right time you can see my feeling
You are my life, This is our life."
Keep writing.

[MuteB912]

A very lovely poem, thought, it seems a little rough around the edges. Maybe work on developing your sentence structure a little more so your poem will flow more smoothly and so your sentences make a little more sense to you readers (some of your sentences are a bit confusing). Other than that, I really like your poem; it's very sweet. Thanks for sharing your work.

[Ellen Kolman]

beautiful Sam...I understand your feelings...I love your poems

[Emily L]

Very sweet words, i'm getting the sense that its about a newly married couple. Once you and your spouse are married its as if you become one. Very nice choice of words. Never stop writing!