When?

What does it take to earn the right to celebrate?

Where must I go to escape the past that only I know?

What must I give to find the way to truly live?

Who must I leave to learn how to alone achieve?

When will I know?

The time passes oh so slow…

Reviews

[Moving Mass]

This stasis we all go through makes us who we are. Many people fail, and become weak. But for others, this imprisonment makes us strong.

[Sseoni]

I was really surprised when I read this poem because I wasn't quite sure what to expect when I read the title. It was a short, but very well written poem that I think that a lot of people can relate to since many are still questioning things in their lives. Wonderful poem!