Summer Break

 

End of the school year is,

Marked by the deathly temperatures

Rising form the sun,

 

Boats, Canoes, Jet skis

Beers, lemonade, and water

Bikinis, swim trunks, flip-flops,

Tan lines and sunburns

Long drunk nights under

The tiki- torches,

 

 

This is what summer break is about!

Reviews

[Scott Francis]

when i had the chance to experience all the promised joys of summer, i stayed home and read philosophy crap. that was my summer break, so i can't relate to this...nicely written nonetheless.

[Travis Lawrence]

Great descriptions, it's a lovely thought.

"Marked by the deathly temperatures
Rising form the sun,"

Did you use "form" intentionally? I really hope so haha, I like the word play there if yes!

-Travis

[Kelsie :]]

Oh my gosh...
you are soooooo right!!! im so excited for future crazyyyy summers :D

[JC Fox]

Man this makes me miss summer! I love the different colors used to accent certain words, great job

[Christina-Marie]

I need to learn to write about more things.. broaden my writing like you do.