The Smile Song

 

Sing loud and proud

 

Making everyone disappear,

 

Intrigued by anything that is music

 

Leaning on the verbal emotion, and

 

Enjoying every breath it took to sing.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Yeah.. how true.. it`s seemed that you`ve composed a new song with your beautiful words.. Music`s all what keeps us happy and smiley all the day and you`ve well expressed the feelings of it through words. Excellent write!

[pinpen]

I love it, so wonderful

[Veronica]

Leaning on the verbal emotion. Yes. Fantastic.

[Don Coorough]

A groovy point of view with some psychedelic images. - EllisD

[Raja]

Such a nice waltz I have ever heard! I like the poem. It has everything - the emotion, intelligence, feel, tune, and interests.

Thank you.

Raja

[An owl on the moon]

The rhythm of your words give them such power and joy. And just like music lifts the spirit, your lyrics are like sunshine! Beautiful!!!

Craig

[Ralphy]

A marvelous way to express your love for music. To enter a world that belongs to you even if just for a moment. Nice poem

[eric mccarthy]

cool little poem you got here. yay for music (especially b. b king!).