Lamentation of Bitter Sweet Lips

Just something I wrote as a way to vent :) another lyrical poem. So look below fir a vid of me singing it

New wounds open old wounds, 

which flow all the sweeter.

She made me die,

and so now we shall treat her. 

In the end, fat on the honey sweet treats of my lips, 

she shall be plump enough.....to eat her. 

And watch her come tumbling down, 

grind her pretty face into the ground. 

Me oh my, my poor dear you sealed your fate. 

Repentance and forgiveness, far off your plate.  

You claim you were right, and your actions were light.

Then wipe that silly smirk off your face. 

When you die....

I want to see your still beating heart race.

Now bow down and know your place.

In the end as I see the moon shine in your eyes, 

and I struggle with my final goodbyes. 

Know I shall miss you, 

know in my dreams that I always shall kiss you. 

But your lips shall always taste bitter, 

even with my heart all a twitter. 

I shall know where those lips have been, 

.....making other men grin. 

I gave you love and compassion,

yet you treat me in this fashion. 

Now pay for your final mistake, 

for tonight my revenge I shall take. 


( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BoPlLCMQPHw&feature=plcp <- vid of me singing this poem)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this story in the poem. I like the honest and direct feel of the words. Sometime when anger and disappointment take us away. We have nothing left good to give. I like the strong ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[K.G]

I must say i perfer this sung to me then read, its quite beautiful the way u sing kinda like. . .fairies? lol srry cant think of the music genra, very lovely and haunting in a way non the less :3 quite cachy too