Idle Swing

Moonlit sky glows anight, 

Eerie cast on lonely swing, 

Sends chills down the spine....

Reviews

[Green]

How you managed to create such a vivid scene in my mind using so few words amazes me but I saw it so clearly that it was downright freaky. Almost made me shiver a little at the end but I caught myself. It is interesting though, all the different ideas that popped into my mind that might cause that little chill on a night lit by a moon...

[Relic]

This is really cool. I like it. Nice writing.

[Ezekiel Silver]

I like how well you bring the deep emotion into this piece with just a few words! Nice work!!

[Vertigoingnowhere]

Wow! I loved this! Thanks so much for not keeping this to yourself, Mind checking out some of my stuff? thanks

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yeah,..i feel that

nice job

[The Dreamer]

as i read these lines, i imagined it all - dark night, a full moon - a lonely swing in a clearing, outlined in silver by the moon, all else in darkness.... yea even i felt a chill down my spine!