Victor...

Everyone's a victor...

People, they talk,
they will call you a loser.
But believe me my friend,
you are a Victor...

 

They haven't walked your path,
they don't know what you've gone through.
They only judge others,
that's all they ever knew...

 

You lost again and again,
you were bullied everytime.
But you always bounced back,
and that's where you shine...

 

Life is like our sun,
Rising in morning and then going down.
Ups and downs are part of our life,
you are not alone in this ghost town...

 

Everytime you've fought back,
against conditions, problems & time.
That's what makes you a Victor,
to prove, you don't need a single dime...

 

You were defeated many times,
but you didn't loose.
You learned from your mistakes,
you're the best in your shoes...

 

Just look around you,
you are not alone...
We're all on the same boat,
there's no need to mourn...

 

you are a victor,
my friend...

 

Your mother's love,
makes you a victor...
Your father's pride,
makes you a victor...
Friend for the lifetime,
makes you a victor...
The path you've walked on,
makes you a victor...

 

You're a not a victim,
my friend,
You're a victor...

Author's Note

Help me improve it..thank you :)

Reviews

[Shitsune Hyuuga]

I very much like this. The message is strongly installed in the piece. It made me more confident that I can be the best that I can be even though most of the people try to pull me down. I hope every reader of your piece would b inspired to go on even at hard times. Good job! Thanks for sharing.

[Sanjh]

Thank you Shitsune, I'm glad you liked it so much...:)

[Misha]

Motivational, full of inspiration and life....loved it

[Sanjh]

I'm glad you liked it Misha, Thank you...:)

[R Smith]

you don't need to improve it, it has the right intention and makes a good poem and gives a clear message to us :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Richard...:)

[Nikki]

"Life is like our sun,
Rising in morning and then going down.
Ups and downs are part of our life,"
Superb my friend!

[Sanjh]

Thank you for reading Nikki...:)

[M.A.Rathore]

Most vibrating motivational feed for the victor still to win more fields. The voice that encourage the fighting is a mighty soul. I have a full faith in motivation. Being a professional teacher I do use motivation for the success of my students. They bring forth all their inner strength to get their desired goal. I confess that motivation is solely one thing in the world that is to be given because we have nothing to give except motivation and it does not cost money. Motivate a person and then tell me I'll inform you his success...
Nice work on motivational poetry. Where poets of the world busy in describing their beloved's physical charms poets like you still have a different thing to write on.
Keep it up..For more motivational you can read some of mine. Thus letting me how motivation works.......

[Sindu]

An amazing powerful message! Personally it inspired me, to accept and keep fighting. Thanks for reminding me that again. I liked the way you wrote it too. powerful.
Life is like our sun,
Rising in morning and then going down.
Ups and downs are part of our life,
you are not alone in this ghost town...

best part for me :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you Sindu, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Sindu]

You're welcome Sanjh! I did, indeed :)

[MomzillaNC]

Very inspirational and encouraging write. I won't offer notes on this one because it's such personal and outreaching piece from you that only you can decide how your voice is to be heard.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much, your reviews always mean a lot to me...:)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Surya pradha]

a very inspirational poem that touched my heart. good moral too. keep up the good work, you seem to be on a roll.(a victory roll, get it?!)

[Sanjh]

Thank you again Surya, your review made my day...:)

[Confuser]

I really enjoyed it. Something to encourage and inspire/victor not victim. The truth about life. Thanks.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much for the kind words...:)

[Gurleen Saluja]

a message delivering write. keep bringing some of the type. Thanks for sharing :)

[Sanjh]

Well said Gurleen, thank you so much for reading....:)