Love's in the air...

You just need to feel it.

Something's different today,
something's unusual.
Sunrise beautiful than ever,
and my sight delusional...

 

There is some magic in the wind...
like a witch's lethal spell.
I have this weird feeling,
and what's this spooky smell?

 

Jules fell for Shawn,
and Sammy proposed Sarah.
They used to hate each other,
and what's wrong with Terra?

 

No one's fighting anymore,
everyone's so polite.
Am I going crazy or something?
Why is everything so right?

 

Is it, what I am thinking?
so peaceful, anywhere I stare.
Oh!!! I know what this spell is,
It's LOVE in the air...

 

But now I realise,
maybe I'm in a dream.
Everything's so perfect,
or atleast it seems.

 

I don't want to wake up,
I don't know what to do.
But I believe in my heart,
someday my dream will come true...

Author's Note

Trying something funny for the first time mixed with a message. Help me with your reviews...

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

this was splendid!!!......

"Something's different today,
something's unusual.
Sunrise beautiful than ever,
and my sight delusional..."

"But now I realise,
maybe I'm in a dream.
Everything's so perfect,
or atleast it seems."

beautifully done......!!!
i liked it!!!
:)

[Sanjh]

Thank you brother...:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome........:) :)

[Lyndy]

Aww, I love this poem. It's very beautiful! Well done. :)

[Sanjh]

Thanks Lyndy. :)

[Penny]

Its the feel good Valentine poem of the year. Nice flow and beautiful comparisons though transition from first and second is sort of abrupt. Rest, it is an intellegent and emotional piece. Thumbs up!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Penny. :)

[Penny]

Pleasure..

[rashu]

ya it was unny and thanks for making me stress free even for sometime before my exams:)
now coming to your poetry
it was nice ..
you wrote it really well
also the words you used enhanced its beauty.
keep writing:)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Rashu...:)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow..... Simply amazing.

Kaze~

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Kaze...:)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Layi Tate]

Sounds like paradise to me !

:)

[Sanjh]

Thank you for reading Layi...:)

[Layi Tate]

Thank you for sharing ..

[Luna Zerimar]

It's okay. Seemed more romantic than comical.

Nothing seemed comical. If you were trying to be funny, you should..maybe make it more cartoonish?

I dunno. x

[Sanjh]

You are right Jessica. Actually I am not good with funny writes...:(
But I'll try to improve for sure...:)

[Brooklyn]

I really liked this! I think it's a good mix of humor but also sends a message and I think many, many people can probably relate.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much for appreciating Brooklyn...:)

[TL Boehm]

I remember feeling like this when all my friends around me were falling in love. A fine poem.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Ragini]

very nice and lovely. heart-warming

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Ragini..:)