My Love...

Another poetry on love...

Look into my eyes,
what do you see?
You'll find love,
deeper than the sea...
You'll be drowned in it,
feeling a wild glee.
You've been searching for love,
follow your heart, it's me...

 

Listen to my voice, 
the song I'm about to sing.
It's incomplete without you,
sounds magical on my six strings...
My voice will shake your heart,
you'll feel the Cupid's sting.
you'll fall for me my dear,
and will fly without any wings...

 

Just look at me,
try to listen to my song.
You'll be spellbound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear, my dear,
there's nothing wrong.
We'll be together forever,
in the romance, lifelong...

Author's Note

Kindly review it...
Special thanks to Dale for helping me improve it...:)

Reviews

[Blue]

"You'll be spell bound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear my dear,
there's nothing wrong."

Perhaps you may want to apply the following corrections? :)
-spellbound
-Have no fear, my dear

I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Blue. I'll make the changes ASAP...:)

[Blue]

You are welcome!

[TRISHA PRASAD]

Beautifully written and like others earlier said.....you are a master at writing love poems. I would love to continue reading your other works.

[Parvathy Nandan]

mmm wow.....readin ds feels jus like watching a film....a gud film dat z...perfectico

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

You are a master of love poems. Keep them up.

[prachi prangya agasti]

Lyrical and well written. Thank you for sharing.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

love in all words & love I see into your eyes.
Come lets make a move & join me in twilight...

Glad to have a glimpse of your work.

[Sanjh]

Wonderful lines. I'm happy you liked it. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome my friend!

[JewelsGold]

I liked this and it is romantic but also a bit predetermined in the rhyme so keep up the good work

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much :)

[Lyndy]

It's a beautiful poem well written! Well done! ;)

[Sanjh]

Thank you Lyndy :)

[Hailey noice]

You are a great writer and I have enjoyed reading your poams, your Poams can change lives and you could make a great and famous poat keep up the good work.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Hailey. I am replying on 3 months old post but still your review made my day. :)

[anne]

Look into my eyes,
what do you see?
You'll find love,
deeper than the sea...
You'll be drowned in it,
feeling a wild glee.
You've been searching for love,
follow your heart, it's me...
beautiful...penned with pure heart...:))

[Sanjh]

I'm glad you liked it, thanks...:)