My Love...

Another poetry on love...

Look into my eyes,
what do you see?
You'll find love,
deeper than the sea...
You'll be drowned in it,
feeling a wild glee.
You've been searching for love,
follow your heart, it's me...

 

Listen to my voice, 
the song I'm about to sing.
It's incomplete without you,
sounds magical on my six strings...
My voice will shake your heart,
you'll feel the Cupid's sting.
you'll fall for me my dear,
and will fly without any wings...

 

Just look at me,
try to listen to my song.
You'll be spellbound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear, my dear,
there's nothing wrong.
We'll be together forever,
in the romance, lifelong...

Author's Note

Kindly review it...
Special thanks to Dale for helping me improve it...:)

Reviews

[Blue]

"You'll be spell bound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear my dear,
there's nothing wrong."

Perhaps you may want to apply the following corrections? :)
-spellbound
-Have no fear, my dear

I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Blue. I'll make the changes ASAP...:)

[Blue]

You are welcome!

[Layi Tate]

Beautiful love song poem.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Layi...:)

[Lizzie Mitchell]

This is very passionate
somewhat scary

[Sanjh]

Thank you for appreciating Lizzie...:)

[Lauren]

This sounds like an enchanting spell someone would put on someone else. I like it. It's very romantic and, well, just, enchanting! Good job!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Lauren, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Penny]

Very romantic write. Again, lyrical and seems like an enchantress' song. Very well done. Thanks for sharing.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much for appreciating Penny...:)

[Penny]

Your most welcome.

[Crazycatgirl_10]

This is super cute. I absolutely love anything that has to do with love.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[Luna Zerimar]

Loved.

Makes a gal trip over her own feet. x

[Sanjh]

Lol, thank you Jessica...:)

[Chaise Nicole]

Usually I cannot stand rhyming in poems but you use it so effectively and it adds beautifully to the overall flow of the piece. nicely done :D

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Chaise, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Pryde Foltz]

A very romantic and passionate write, Sanjh.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Pryde...:)

[LadyNaida]

This is beautiful! It sounds like you are a hopeless romantic like me.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much LadyNaida. And you are right about me, nice to meet you...:)

[LadyNaida]

Welcome to to writers cafe. :)

[Magnus]

Wow!! Wowed! This is awesome! Its beautiful.....is it copy right protected? Lol coz am using this on my lady! (Smile)

[Sanjh]

Lol, thank you so much brother. Use it anyway you want..:)

[Magnus]

Thank you!