Her "Odyssey..."

Surpassing… 

the melancholic moments of truth…

She reached

the hinterland

Where whirled the equanimity…

Under the shed 

Of her bygones…

She rests with a dream…

A little tint of hope

To paint the future…

Unseen!

She learnt to in-act,

In the circumstances, 

So solemn!

And to pass silently 

Through the hilarity 

And claps…

The night crept in…

And unfurled

The veil of shadows…

The stars entrenched within

She feared no evils,

With a lantern of faith…

She traversed the hours of darkness…

And furthers her Odyssey…

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

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...To the past...

Photocredits:

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http://www.ibiblio.org/wm/paint/auth/turner/i/ulysses.jpg

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Author's Note

...Some bygones...
Are worth strengthening...

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Sanjeeta, you have excelled with this poem. I see you in it and all the others that have gone before you and will come after you... walking this particular stretch of road. The message and emotion transcends the words. One of your finest poems, thus far, in my opinion.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks. Inspired.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

You are an awe-inspirer.. :)

[Leslie Philibert]

I worship William Turner. And I like your poem very much too.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Leslie.

[Dayran]

A student of mine once told me working life is like having five tongues and six faces. Your poem sounds like it wants to say exactly that. Nice.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Very true. Thanks.

[roarke]

painting futures unseen marvelous vision.

You've portrayed the unseen moments of the odyssey, the times alone, the silent periods of the hidden heroic.

Great prose.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Roarke.

[Rob Ert]

I was reading this one aloud and I must accept it sounded so bloody melifluous that I'm now donw to turn this into a song when I have more time at my hand...

Well Done...

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Anticipating to hear it as a song... Thanks Robert.

[BlueDreams]

Very beautifully written, a journey through good and bad ,in short a life :)
Really touched :)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thank you.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Some are indeed, a telling and highly perfected piece.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Thomas.