Tantilizing hunger...

Warm, inviting, tantilizing texture...
hard yet soft, its trespass sweetly urged...
Mouth watering, delightful, it soothes the aching palate...
tasteful yet plentiful, my hunger builds more...
Again and again my needs are quenched...
until all is exhausted...
Such a day has exceeded my wants
as I throw away... the yellow peel.
 

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[S.S.P.]

hahaha. I wasn't quite sure what to expect after reading the introduction you sent. It definitely draws your mind in a completely different direction that it's true meaning. I'm still smiling :) I'll admit it took me a couple seconds for my mind to wrap around the "yellow peel", ha. excellent trickery indeed!