On writing

Suggestions for a better title are welcome. Also, feedback is always welcome.

Words
Lines
Not even rhymes
Only my feelings
And thoughts uncertain
Lost in the holes
Of all these sheets of paper.

Author's Note

The winter holiday has finally come. I wrote quite a bit in the last months. I will post some of that stuff. 8th grade is a lot of work. But during this holiday I will try to be as active as possible. Feedback is welcome, as always. :)

Reviews

[iamshadowine]

your writings are amazing! this is a brilliant write!
keep writing :D

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Thank you very much :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the white space says almost as much as the words that fill the spaces...just like sadness fills the heart.

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Wonderful comparison, and very true. Thanks for reviewing this poem.

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Words are not lost once they are said or written, they have touched. They have journeyed beyond you to someone else. Lovely writing, dear poet :)

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Thanks for the kind words, lynn. Beautifully said.

[alifeacoustic]

Nicely done. Sometimes we can say a lot in few words, other times we write pages of nothing much use. The who where why of writing is as enigmatic as a certain paintings smile.

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Nice review. I love your last sentence. Thanks for stopping by.

[Revan Pronghorn]

Quite dry. Doesn't express anything. Unfortunately, I'll have to say it's one of your worst.

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Hmm..I tried to show my connection with the notebook I write in. I thank you for your honesty.