Journal

You can call it a journal,
I will call it a record;
With every passing second
I will fill it with emotion.

Author's Note

Feedback welcome. :)

Reviews

[iamshadowine]

you are giving me inferiority complexes to no limits! this is so amazing!!
keep writing :D

[Marcus Sergiu David]

I'd say that first sentence in your review was more poetic than this poem, but thank you very much :)

[iamshadowine]

you're welcome :)

[Tess Melendez]

I feel that there could be more added to this poem. I think you could use a little figurative language to add to it and make it a lot better. Then again it could be that I am not a huge fan of short works. I just read this and thought that maybe there could be more to it because it is a good idea for a poem.

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Thanks for the idea. I'm currently expanding on this one, I'm going to update this when I finish.

[alifeacoustic]

Always fun to read years down the line. You are right of course. Journals are journeys, full of emotion to record who you were before now. Great idea.

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Thanks for the kind words.