under the footrest

Senryu

under the footrest

he crawled hiding and plays...

sleep slips up on him

Author's Note

Great grandson..

Reviews

[Miss Owl]

I love this! It's so sweet. Very visual poem. A delightful read.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

MO,

Thanks for the kind review of my work..

Sara

[Miss Owl]

You are most welcome.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Okay..Sara

[Mauricio Montoya]

i can visualize so much from this short piece..thank you for sharing

[Coyote Song]

This is sweet. I can visualize this happening as I read. This is a fantastic senryu.

[An owl on the moon]

Saw your note and made me smile to make this perfect, restful connection. How sweet sleep comes upon children... it too often escapes us as we grow weary in the world.

[David Scott]

Reminds me of childhood...
Funny how a few lines can bring back so many thoughts to the memory.

[Lydia Shutter]

What a heartwarming senyru this is! I could picture a child curling up in a ball to sleep in the midst of playing. Well written. lydI**