a red fire ball

Haiku

a red fire ball

sets the pines raised arms on fire....

fog draped silhouettes

Author's Note

sunrise on the porch

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmm nature all the way ...a fine haiku ...did you mean to have 4 syllables in the first line? ... your fire ball, pines and fog all create an image in me noodle that contain three mwavelous elements .. all are favorite things to me... especially the fog on the pines ;) thanks for sharing Sunflower
E.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Einstein Noodle, Thanks for the visit to my page. I don't think I checked my syllable count on this one probably need to rewrite it. Thanks for bringing my mistake to my attention. SK

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .............. we are all here for each other eh!?

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Sometimes I use the Haiku form without following the rules completely..Sara...Silly poet.

[Einstein Noodle]

from what i gather even the Japanese do not always hold to the traditional 5-7-5 ;)

[Coyote Song]

Love your haiku! It paints a very vivid and beautiful picture of nature.
One I'd love to see!