weighted clouds

Haiku

dark, gray weighted clouds

hide a summer's sun...

swallows' wings cut air

Author's Note

The swallows are out and about in all kinds of weather cleaning the air of insects..

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

A very beautiful wild image. I'd love to see this. I really enjoyed the very visual poem that is full of life and movement.

[Mauricio Montoya]

cloudy days for me bring sadness and sunny day make me feel happy. this piece makes me think of those days in between. nice work thank you for sharing