Agony Of Suicide

Blitz

Death by suicide
Death in agony
Agony of poison
Agony as emotions race

Race through organs
Race through minds
Mind tortured
Mind destroyed

Child without a mother
Child in tears
Tears flow
Tears remain

Remain insecurities
Remain fears
Fears torment
Fears hold captive

Captive to separations
Captive to uncertainty
Uncertainty of life
Uncertainty of love

Love evaporates
Love uplifts
Uplifts in thoughts
Uplifts in deeds

Deeds done
Deeds good or bad
Bad action
Bad examples

Examples of adults
Examples of illness 
Illness overwhelms
Illness destroys

Destroys humble home
Destroys reputation
Reputation disappears
Reputation negative

Negative example
Negative life
Life wiped out
Life cut short

Short of joy
Short of hope
Hope disappears
Hope not suicide

Suicide changed all
Suicide annihilated
Annihilated 
All 

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

A very stark and sad situation. there is a lot of pain in the person who does this or causes others to do this. A lost hopeless situation within one's hurting soul.

Impressive poem.

[Miss Owl]

I think this is a well crafted poem. And your painful words reflect a painful reality. Everyone hurts, too bad there isn't good help for all then there would be more happiness to go around. Good job!