Where The Pomegranates Grow

Rhyme with lyrical quality

Where The Pomegranates Grow

Outside the city where lush
Lovely pomegranates grow
The spring has sprung and flowers show
Birds rear their young in tones hushed

The lady weeps in a silent
Strain, love has left a broken heart
In pain, where the pomegranates start
To bloom once again, so vibrant

Hush my love your chance to shine bright
Slipped in on a cloud silver lined
A knight so good and deeply kind
Caught your tears throughout the long night  

He sprinkles them upon the air
Pomegranate bushes sprang up
Their juice forever fill your cup
Arise love, his maiden fair

Receive his love, freed from despair
Outside the city, in rural
Terrain. a perfect scene ~mural
Where pomegranates grow with flair

Author's Note

Written for a contest with a first line prompt..I altered the first line's wording to more fit in with the type of poem that I was going to write..

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

A really outstanding poem. It is very very beautiful, love the pomegranates flowing throughout the poem. Love the romance and the happy ending in this.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Thanks for stopping by and taking time to comment on my work..I am glad that you liked the poem..Happy endings are for a lifetime..Sara

[Coyote Song]

I enjoyed the poem. Your very welcome.

[Miss Owl]

A very beautiful love poem full of the visions and taste of pomegranates. A romantic poem of heartache and love. I like the happy ending. It's full of hope which seems to be lacking a lot now in the world.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

MO, Yes, there seems to be a negative air floating around which is very real in some cases..The world is a scary place with all that is happening plus youth go through so much in growing up..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

[Miss Owl]

Your welcome.