Transform

What could be a perfect love..

A love that has weathered wild storms And youth's fierce passion contained Tender, deeper than lust ingrained An opened sonnet of life transform A tapestry still on an open loom Unfinished here upon this earth Those golden years, a story of mirth Their roots deep, fragrant flowers bloom Two hearts somehow in rapport Good character, a crown they share With every gesture and each care Maybe their overflow will pour A bond that's never tired nor tire Their union, an inspiration's theme A love that's found in every dream So let us celebrate this pair

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Such a warm, celebratory piece, full of depth and honor. This poem beautifully honors a love that’s endured, grown, and inspired. It feels both intimate and timeless, like a blessing spoken aloud.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Thank you, An Owl, for the nice review of my work. I thank you for dropping by. Sara K

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow, I had to read on because this write I felt, for me its a first love one you can't forget it comes back in dreams, great job in the imagery in every word one can fell the emotion, love the ending, we become one.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Thank you, Mauricio. Yes, it was a first love and continuing love. Sara K

[Mauricio Montoya]

Always lol great read