Winter Fog

Monoku,

 

 

Damp cold fog rolls through the opening in hedge

 

 

                 

 

 

 

 

                       like a Coke shaken pouring

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Wonderful! Such power in those two sentences, It creates a strong visual. Very enjoyable!

[Mauricio Montoya]

I take there will more? if so it will interesting to see how this ends.
keep on writing.

[Desert Dreamer]

You have done well to create the image of moving fog. I was surprised to find the word Coke used to describe something in nature as it seems so far from it.

[An owl on the moon]

What a vibrant description that brings this scene to life.. I can feel and see the fog moving in this cold dance...