Rosemary and Thyme

Monoku

Rosemary wanted Thyme to go away

.                      for she couldn't stand his scent..

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

I guess she didn't want to make, time, with him??

I got nothing.

Loved this!

[An owl on the moon]

You've created such a playful garden theme with your vivid, fragrant write. I have these two in my garden, along with a few other delicious sorts... :)

[Ladysue]

I don't know this form, but I like this..it made me laugh too...nicely done

[Desert Dreamer]

Great monoku! I had forgotten about this poetic form. This one made me laugh.