Star Afar

Quatrain, short

Still quiet of the day

When all settle for night

Sleepy heads_ yawn _relax

Sun no longer bright

Time to commune with God

Watch for very first star

Feel the air cooling down

Wish again on star afar

Reviews

[Pax]

refreshing...coolness..i like it.

[An owl on the moon]

During the heat of this summer, your words speak forth a place of comfort... a haven of longing... It is in that place where the soul can find that quiet peace we so need to soar through the day.