Whimsy

Whimsy

 

In an imaginary house on an imaginary lane

we play our imaginary games.

I imagine me and you

and you imagine you and I

and together we are an imaginary pair

of imagineers.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words and thoughts in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Imagination is beautiful. And so is this.

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is extremely brilliant. I love it

[alesuriko]

So adorable! I love the... imagination that went into this poem and using this word in every line. Very creative and very cute! But it also has this metafictional vibe as if it's commenting on all fictional characters, their lives, their settings, their friends and connections, their thoughts, all are imaginary and they themselves, what they think and what they imagine, become imaginary imagineers. Wonderful manipulation!

[Shalini Dinesh]

imagination to its extent, lovely....

[W.k.kortas]

It's certainly cummings-esque, but it feels incomplete to me. There isn't enough here to make us really see and have any feeling for the you and I. It has the potential to be something quite nice, but it ain't there yet.

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

Very imaginary...I LOVE IT!

[Benten]

I'm such an imagineer. Love it!

[For my life I write]

i love imagining... it never grows old, whether playing house when we are little or coming up with a great poem... yea!

[Daisy123]

This made me smile:) Great use of repetition, I liked this a lot. Good job!