Hidden Walls

I't's about hidden barriers in life

I've been running all my life

Never stopping for a rest

To the destination for the quest

I'm been searching all my life

For a new revival

And the meaning that can be

All this world has been spinning

And the journey's never ending

My life keeps revolving

Like a merry-go-round

That's never ending

I'm running all the way

I need a way out

From those hidden walls that surround me

I'm trying all the way 

I need a way to break free

From those hidden walls I see

That's never ending

Reviews

[Saddam]

I need a way to break free
From those hidden walls I see

That's never ending.

It reminding me a quote of famous Indian writer Rahul Sankrityayan, He said human nature is walking, and you dead if you are stop. Great write dear.

[Lyndy]

Thanks so much for your inspiring review, dear friend. :D

[Peach]

I feel a certain kind of connection between you and the poem. You just poured all your thoughts into such work of art. Keep it up.

[Lyndy]

Thanks a lot for the lovely review! :D

[Darren Welsh]

Nice poem, I can definitely relate to it.

[Lyndy]

Thanks a lot! :D

[Devanshu Rajput]

Life is all about running here and there.

A nice poem, with impressive rhyme scheme.

Thanks for sharing.

Devanshu

[Lyndy]

Thanks so much! :D

[nazia]

All of us are either running after or running from one thing or the other Lyndy.
A great form of expression :)

[Lyndy]

Thanks so much, Nazia! :D

[Jamestown]

I can relate as will many others, this is well written and great flow!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lyndy]

Thanks so much, James. :D

[Ana B.]

A beautiful piece of work of a pure heart who wants to find the hidden sense in everything. Great work!

[Lyndy]

Thanks so much, Ana! :D

[psisatyr]

The leitmotif of conducting one's own escapism has been well brought out.

[Lyndy]

Thanks, haha! ;)