The Ocean

Can't wait for the summer when the ocean can carry me away

Waves lap at my feet
shackling my toes to the earth
Soft whispers calling out
reaching for my soul
I walk out farther
Water covers ankles,
knees, shoulders
The sea says its safe
My mother cries out NO
But the water is a part of me
And I'm a part of it

Reviews

[Whiskurz]

This is a very well penned piece my friend......Whisk

[just is]

I really enjoyed this write, it's lovely

[Lydia]

Very deep and interesting in such a short poem. I liked it.