The mind is like a hallway

Something i wrote in 2008

"The mind is like a hall way
It has many incloves & door ways
The incloves have things
Set up so they can be seen,
The door ways lead to many different room
Some are nice and tidy,
While others are messy
Some are light
Some are dark
Some you want to know about
And others not really
But no matter what
It all needs cleaning
And dusting sometimes"

Reviews

[Mr. ECHO]

true.

[EMF]

You work is so good, and strikes such a cord in me that I felt I had to read all in one go,

So good I would like to keep reading. I hope you post more

[Brandon Henson 1990]

dam u gorgeous