Dance in this storm

Dance with me in this rain, The downpour will be the tempo...

Dance with me in this rain,

Just you and me, 

 The downpour will be the tempo, 

And the thunder, the drums, 

 The lighting shall be paparazzi, 

 You can be the lead singer, 

And I'll hum along, 

Spin me around, 

 While the wind cheers us on, 

Whistling and yelling, 

Spin me in this turmoil, 

Dance with me in this storm

Author's Note

If its a revolution without dancing,
Its a revolution not worth having

Reviews

[Cassie]

This is so so so beautiful

[LazerRays]

thank you :)

[kitty]

Be by my side through it all...I beg of you! Rain good - sort of cleanses the soul but lightening an thunder are so frightening! Thank you for this profound piece!

[LazerRays]

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! Much appreciated, friend

[kitty]

U R welcome!

[john l smith]

If we are to have rain, and lately we have had plenty, this sounds like a decent way to the condition
A good fun write
Dave

[LazerRays]

thank you :)

[barleygirl]

LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! Living in drought-stricken California, I crave rain so I had to click on your poem. This is one of the best jazzy inspiring rain-themed poems I've seen lately. It makes a person want to get up & shake a leg. I love your wide variety of personifications, which brings the whole party alive. Love this! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[LazerRays]

Oh thank you so much! :D I'm glad you enjoy. Haha- it's winter right now in Maine so I don't crave the rain. I'd be slipping on the driveway and cracking my skull. Haha.
Thanks again, it means a lot when my poem means something to someone :)
Hugs back,
Sarah (or saree

[Papaya]

wow, I can totally picture this crazy dance and hear the sounds as it builds to a sunny climax after the storm has passed.

[LazerRays]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful and hopeful poem. To dance in a Summer rain with someone you love. Perfect place. Thank you Sarah for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[LazerRays]

Thank you so much for your review!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Sarah.

[Suhd]

Wonderful. Whimsical. Romantic and sweet yet I also sense something dark in this. Great work!

[LazerRays]

Thank you so much!

[Abdul Aziz]

Succinct and thoroughly enjoyable poem! This poem exudes a kind of kinetic energy to match the sensation of dancing in the rain.

[LazerRays]

thank you so much :P

[Wild Rose]

Dancing in the storm
Could just be to keep warm
Dance on one leg while putting waterproof trousers on
Got em on now we run
Inside until we see the sun


Only thing I could conjour up - Yes I liked it

[LazerRays]

thank you so much :) your review means a lot