The Stars in Perspective

I see perspective in the stars. We cannot be accidents... This isn't a result of mistakes

When I look at the stars, 

I think of perspective, 

How some kid would gasp, 

And an adult might only laugh,

Different reaction and view, 

What give us opinion?

 What makes us human? 

To some the stars are navigation, 

Or a form of transportation, 

What angle do they see? 

 I see the future,

The same stars the first humans did, 

The masterpiece painting of God, 

I see hope, dreams, and will,

Time itself stretched in the stars, 

All in perspective

Author's Note

If it doesnt make sense....
Too bad, I get it :)

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think I notice their absence more than their presence. The prospect of a starless sky and living under it is frightening to me. But then, to me, stars are not found only on the sky ;) I do see the will to carry on in them though; they reemerge the same every night, perhaps a way of reminding us that there is hope after all. ..
Interesting write, as always, Ms. Poe. :)

[LazerRays]

Ah the absense of stars is perhaps the worst.... Thank you as always for the review, Ms. Kay :P

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

quote.. i see the same stars the first human did
i love this
it takes me back to adam and eve to God creating his masterpiece plan
this is real
this is great
i love this poem
thanks for entering this into my comp

[LazerRays]

Thank you! The stars make me think so freaking much. Like a song stuck in my head. I get this feeling that's so hard to explain. It's like looking at a portal. Seeing the past and future.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

yes i love the stars too

[Ronaldo]

Stars seem to be Rorschach test. I currently see infinity and its grand stage looking down on me... the finite bound to a shorter time... Thank you. I liked this.

[LazerRays]

Thank you soo much!

[John the Baptist]

The important thing is to keep seeing those things in the stars. Life can make some forget them. Good work.

[LazerRays]

Thank you!

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Wiliam Blake once said. Poem is not philosphical essay. We can write even nonsese poetry is our soul in our words. Our real reflection in our creation. I am not sure if yku see same stars like hu ans before cause they also change and also they die. I think best masteroie e of god is creation of god. Thats true i can se myself at stars. I also see lot of stories behind eac star. There is always lot of posdibilities. I see stars like metaphor of human lifes. Sometimes we shine and sometimes we are turn into black or white . What make us human if yiu see animals and flowers hey behave quite according to logic. But humans are most behave without logic falling to love, write poems a d make other art. People who behave logicaly and make logical things are not ussualy too much humans. Thats why i enjoy chaotic things. Sorry reply in tandom order that how y mind works. I think i am too human. Have nice day.

[LazerRays]

Thank you! Do you agree that there is things humans can never understand? That there are no boundaries because we don't know where we can set them? That is also something I think about with the stars

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Yes I agree our minds are so limited and shallow. I always find funny how humans want everything explain at logic and science. There is so much more then that.

[sette]

and perspectives makes us more reachable wiser and being more human..

[LazerRays]

Thank you!

[phill..m]

I see the stars admiring themselves through your eyes, whilst the universe vibrates
through your body to feel the night breeze on its face, with an understanding
you're indivisible. Enjoyed your poem.

[LazerRays]

Thank you!

[Alexis Turner]

It seems like you're getting at some really deep existential questions about the existence of God. You should check out "The Night March" by Herman Melville. I think it has some parallels to your poem.

[LazerRays]

Thank you, I will

[LKBillips]

It's wonderful how many different views the same objects can be seen from. Stars seem to always bring reflection. :) Thanks for sharing!

[LazerRays]

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