More Stars in the Sky

Nobody sees when a star fades 

Because there’s more in the sky 

It doesn’t matter, 

 Because the others still shine

The universe won’t mourn me 

If I say goodbye 

Because there’s always more stars- 

 To shine in the sky

Author's Note

The stars have a reason to shine, and I?
I don’t...

Reviews

[wordman]

well i doubt that,we all would miss ya

[LazerRays]

Thank you word man :)

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[.]

Hey, I'll miss you if you went away someday! There maybe other stars but they can't compensate your extensively bright shine.
Moreover we are always together like a cluster of stars, if one fades, we'll shine for them, won't let it fade away.
And your poetry, your creativity and enthusiasm are the reasons you'll shine and that never ends not even after hundred billions of years. You'll still shine like the young charming one!

[LazerRays]

Thank you for that analogy MC that was very kind. Thanks for your review :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but there will be one less light...and someone will miss that particular light.
I am sure of it.
j.

[LazerRays]

Go outside and look at the stars. The next night see if any are gone that you notice. Thank you for your review, it means a lot

[Chris Shaw]

Each little star counts, each little star is a part of the broader picture. I felt the sadness here and want to give that little star a polish to get her sparkle back.

Chris

[LazerRays]

Thank you very much but it’s easy to get lost up there hidden among the stars. Thanks for the shine