Lastly...

As I looked at you,

I miss the way you put my hair behind my ear
and whispered into my ear

the three words that kept me going.

The words that most people rarely ever mean

or never get to hear.

Truthfully from the person they are meant to be with.

Your last kisses killed me slowly

as I knew I would never kiss 

your communication with the world again. 

Reviews

[soulesswriter]

very well written and sounds like you put a lot of emotion to it.real nice and good writing its very sentimental and that's good many people like to relate to stuff like this.its an good poem and you manage to get the feeling out with a short amount of words which is cool because you used perfect wording.

[Scott Metro]

Very pretty...you expressed this well.

Scott

[Sara S.]

Thanks Scott ☺

[Sami Khalil]

This was beautiful and lasting in the senses...Bravo...................

[Sara S.]

Thank you very much ☺

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Why Nori]

Should be behind instead of being

[Sara S.]

Thank you for that! Did not notice my error! ☺