Monsters, you can stay.

I lay here and think,

"I'll just let the world pass by me".

As this earth spins in circles

I lay here,

Silent and still.

This way

no one could touch me.

For I am invincible.

I can say and wonder whatever I desire.

And you monsters can't judge me,

even if you're hiding in my head.

Author's Note

whatcha, whatcha thinking?

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

I liked the attitude you describe in the poem........ I could relate to that.......and honestly a fantastic poem.......
I have read your three poems by far.....and i construe you like darker themes......the kind that appeal to me the most!! So thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.

[Sara S.]

Darker poems are best. They get very deep about a person and what they are going through. And thank you very much again for reading all my poems! Means a lot ☺

[annabellee]

I like it a lot. powerful and well written.
I liked the message.
keep up the good work :)

[Sara S.]

Thank you very much ☺

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Christoph]

Very cool. I'm into your style in all three pieces here so far, and this is the early favorite. Possibly because my cranium is a halfway house for all manner of demons, and possibly because you're just good at this sort of thing.

[Sara S.]

Im very glad you like my pieces, and hopefully you will enjoy the new additions i will be adding soon. Eh, I'm alright ☺ I would love to check out some of your pieces!