As I Fall - 2015

Just felt like it. After all I had just written the poem called: Standing alone.

As I fall,

I remember,

how it used to 

be.

As I fall

I see,

you are not 

there

to catch

me.

When I fall,

will you remember,

how it used to be,

you and me?

When I fall,

will you see,

that you are

not there

to catch me?

Author's Note

Dont ignore all of those feelings.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts.
"When I fall,
will you see,
that you are
not there
to catch me?"
I like the above lines. You left the reader with questions. Nice emotional ride in your poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SariahM]

Hi, and thanks.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello and you are welcome. I will come back and read more of your work in three days. I'm working too hard.

[SariahM]

okay. Efffort appreciated.

[SariahM]

oops. sorry.

[Yanghwa Hong]

I love the last verse; i can really feel the emotions. its so succinct, yet powerful. i like it c:

[SariahM]

Thank you so much!