Whispers of the Unfinished

Whispers of the Unfinished

A Story by Sarthak
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Love beyond death, and the question: what does it mean to be truly free?

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Prologue: The Letter That Arrived Too Late

In a quiet town where the train never ran on time, Kabir received a letter three months after she died.

The envelope was lavender, her favorite color.
The writing was hers. No stamp. No postmark.
It read:

"If love still lives in you… meet me where we said goodbye.
I’ll wait until you’re ready to understand what freedom means."
�" Aru

Chapter 1: A Ghost in the Wind

Aru had died in a car crash�"her laugh still echoing in Kabir’s ears when metal folded around her. She had always spoken of freedom: painting barefoot, quitting jobs, vanishing into forests for days.

Kabir had loved her desperately but held her like water�"wanting to keep her, while fearing she’d dissolve.

When she died, he thought the story ended. But the letter… the letter reopened a door.

He returned to the old cliffside cabin where they’d last fought, her final words a whisper on the wind:

"You don’t love me�"you just want to own my stillness."

Now, standing there alone, the wind whispered again:

“Do you still think freedom is leaving?”

Chapter 2: The Between-World

That night, he dreamt vividly�"except it didn’t feel like a dream.

The cabin lit with golden light. Aru sat by the fireplace, barefoot, painting clouds on the wooden walls.

“Am I dreaming?” he asked.

She smiled. “You’re remembering.”

Each night he returned. Her laughter. Her questions. Her touch�"not warm, but not cold either. She was not a ghost. She was unfinished.

“I never really left,” she told him. “I stayed in the echo of your grip, in your refusal to let me go.”


Chapter 3: What is Freedom?

As nights passed, her visits grew shorter. She told him her time in-between was running out.

“I need to move on, Kabir. But I stayed to ask: Do you finally understand what it means to love freely?

He shook his head. “I don’t want you to go.”

“Love is not a prison,” she whispered. “If I have to stay in your heart in chains, that’s not love. That’s fear wearing a mask.”

He finally asked, “Then what is freedom?”

Aru looked out the window, where dawn blurred dream and waking.

“Freedom is when love becomes wind�"felt, but never forced.
It’s choosing to love without needing to possess.
It’s letting someone go without believing you lose them.”

Chapter 4: The Last Goodbye

On the final night, Kabir didn’t beg her to stay.

He sat beside her. Held her hand.

“I was afraid,” he said. “That letting go meant forgetting. That freeing you meant I’d lose the only part of me that mattered.”

She leaned in, forehead to his.
“You never lose love. Only the illusion that it’s something you can keep in a box.”

The cabin faded. Her image dissolved into light.

Before disappearing, she whispered:

“Now we are free.”

Epilogue: The Cliffside Wind

Kabir never stopped loving her. But he no longer haunted memories.

He painted. He walked barefoot. He let the wind through the windows and never shut it out.

And sometimes, when he stood on the cliffside, the wind would brush past his ear, soft and mischievous.

“See?” it would whisper.
“You finally learned to hold me by not holding at all.”

© 2025 Sarthak


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It's so hard to love people enough to let go.
Well written! Clearly tells the difference between love and attachment.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sarthak

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind feedback
Beautifully written! Love cannot be bound.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarthak

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind feedback

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