In The Night

In the dark glow embers

the fragrance of September

the glowing of neon lights

and to walk batman invites

in the trees the sad wind howls

scare glowing eyes of owls

Reviews

[sasha]

Thank you, Rahul, I am very glad to read your lines))

[Rahul]

Ok, it's an optimistic piece now :) I enjoyed this piece even i've read it at late night indeed. I'm glad to read your work once again after a long time :)

[sasha]

Thank you, Jacob, glad to see you!!! I love your lines. Such a nice and optimistic ending..
(I will brave the rain and go shopping).

Good night, Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the sad wind as autumn nears, the wise owl lets on with his eerie sounds..and glowing eyes that the near sunrise will be cold.

love the allusion to batman..and the invite...what we can' t see coming we must brave, and we will.