lonely night ahead

Take off your gloves and hat

Take off your coat and shirt

Take off your shoes and socks

It’s time to go to bed

A lonely night ahead

Reviews

[Rahul]

Hahaha, simple, smooth and a touchable write you made. I liked your this shorty write :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so good and such a surprise...a sad surprise...as we see it as one person inviting another...until the reflection at the end where the speaker is talking to him or herself.

well done.

[sasha]

I am so glad to receive your review, Jacob, it is always something special..

[Hatchling]

Love it!!!!! I like the flow of it. Keep up the great work

[sasha]

thank you so much for nice words, Wolflover!