Ambulance Ride

I feel so exposed,

Like I've got nothing to hide.

As i lie in this ambulance.

A defribillator by my side.

 

I've been stripped off all my ego,

I've lost all my pride.

As i sit in this,

Long and painful, ambulance ride.

 

I wish my love was with me,

So i could say goodbye.

Before i end this small,

And insignificant life.

 

I'd like to tell her that I love her,

And when i'm gone not to cry.

And i'd like to do all this,

Before i rot and die.

 

My heart takes in its last breaths of life.

But i am at peace.

My doomsday has arrived.

And i have finally ended this long, and painful,

Ambulance Ride.

Author's Note

Before anyone asks, a defibrillator is a device which in movies they slam into the guy's chest n pass an electric current through him to get a dead guy to start living again.

Reviews

[Sasha]

thank you. i did not realize that it was this different when i wrote it. but i guess that turned out for the better. :)

[JenLyn]

I like it, it's different. Keep up the good work. :)

[Undying Glory]

this is unique i must say. everyone writes sad poems but you likened it to an ambulance ride, first one i've ever read like this. and yes all the feelings are there. good job