The Blank Paper

just a short verse.

Fill this paper up,
With words I don't know.
Write about pain.
Write it slow.
Feel each moment,
Don't let go.
Write about real pain,
Not the kind people normally show.
I'm talking about when you're alone,
And feel there is no falling,
Any further below.
Then when you run out of words,
Come back to me,
I'll give you some more.
Then write about that,
And the paper is filled up, OH No!

Author's Note

What do you think??
criticize me, complement me. Either way, thank you. (:

Reviews

[KellieJeanne]

This is a very good poem. The rhyme scheme is clever but not too in your face. It's a good read

[Im His Daughter]

its a good poem...

[Amy]

I love this!
Allot of people in my life are hurting so this kind of hit a raw nerve
but it flows so smoothly and it made me think.
thanx

[Coyote Poetry]

When I can't write. I reach in and find pain. I read about the pain of others in old poetry. Nothing like a Neruda poem to open up the desire to write. The poem is more of motivation and thought. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Yang]

Hmmm... I really like this one...
It flowed smoothly and it really spoke to the reader...

And I love the idea...

Very good write...:)