My Heart and I

What's wrong ?!

I asked my heart ..

I have this feeling that I haven't had in a really long time ..

This beautiful inner feeling of excitement , happiness and extreme joy ..

Is it Love ? I asked ..

My heart was in silence ..

 I don't want to name it ..

Cause it's so lovely .. everything about it was lovely ..

Your smile , your eyes , your pink cheeks when your shy , your  hair , your smell ..your laugh ..

and best of all ..

your lips ..

hhhhhh I sighed .. 

The night my lips were kissed ..

How did that feel ?

My heart was beating so fast as If I ran a marathon ..

it felt like I was flying ..it felt different .. it felt amazing .. it felt unbelievably outstanding ..

Like your heart was carrying me and flying away .. forgetting about everything. .everyone and the world .. the noise .. felt so peaceful .. so quiet .. so exquisite ..

Wow ..! I shouted ..

My heart was still beating so fast ..

and was saying ..

I never felt this way ..

I never loved someone this way..

It's just ..

A Story , a memory that will remain and live inside of me ..

Forever ..

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Your poem says it all. Without elation, why would we care to continue? Perhaps life is the evolution of elation; and love is the cherry atop this delightful ice cream sundae. Why do cats purr, birds sing, and butterflies dance?

[Sasha]

Thank you ! :)
So true ..

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I know what you just explained here:) wow when you get that moment its like walking on puffy clouds or watching the stars hand in hand. I got to experience it and held deep inside me for 8 long years before I ever told her how I felt:) I spoke it all not 1 word did I hold back. I held her hands I kissed them I graced her hair, wow I held her in my arms,and than it got down to that look when eyes never part. What you thinkin she said? I said real nervous I cant say. She smiled we can do this all night, I said can I kiss you,she replies yes. I kissed her we held each other 30 more minutes and she had to go home. I said I love you,I left with my heart beating as it never did. However the next did that ended in some email. My heart was so torn I wanted to die. You did a powerful write thank you for sharing it my friend.

[Sasha]

Wow ...I am speechless ..
Thank you Jonathan :)

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Do be speechless be spoken, give that away my gosh we live in a world that holds so much back,and we need to speak. And were poets here way better than Hall Mark! I mean don't get me wrong they do a great job but wow they are over rated on their prices for a card. Words are priceless and given and from the heart always. And you gave all you had my friend. True it hurts suck the life out of you. But when it all ends we can start over again:) I always found you work to be awesome well spoken and straight up where the heart will always beat so don't you ever hide that gift ok:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Your truly welcome my dear friend:)

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dont mean sorry I get over excited writing!

[Sasha]

no worries :)