A Long way

 

He is heart broken

she is so far away

 

All he thinks about is her

He loves her so much and he wont give her up

 

The story of two tales

Will his love for her prevail?

 

He reaches for her hand In the distance

She takes it...

 

Reviews

[CrimsonFall]

I like this one. It inspires hope, I think. At least for those who can relate to it.

[Death Girl]

This reminds me of my one love.This is deep. you should submit this into the all poems contest.

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Short and sweet, but the meaning is deep, and the emotions are strong in just the few words. Nicely done!