A kiss of Paradise

I want to go somewhere

Where the butterfly's roam free

There is no fear and only tears of joy

My hair can soak the sun rays

The children can run and play

I don't want to be sad anymore,

I don't want to cry anymore 

I want to go somewhere

Where the wind blows my hair

Where there is fruit on every tree,

The ground full of flowers 

I want to go to paradise..

Reviews

[C.A.Jordon]

beutiful...

[André-J-Franklin]

Don't we all dream of such a place! this is really beautiful keep up the great work!

[Boldpen]

A very beautiful description of heaven and its happiness.
The determination to reach paradise of joy was very intense in your write.
Like always, It held my heart.
Great Job!

[En.Ki]

Good Job, short but kept me reading. I don''t know where paradise is but you have wanting to go.

[Dylan S.]

I like to think of paradise as the journey, and not the destination. That's just me, though. Nice read, by the way.

[Rea]

makes you wonder, is heaven really a place on earth? or is it something thats just there..in our hearts maybe, I like the way you paint the picture:)

[Ami N.]

Me too :) Loved this poem! So carefree..
Great write!!