Aspects of you

the longing to find someone perfectly suited for you

You're my obsession

the tingling sensation you give me when you 

you crinkle your nose just before you allow that lone tear to fall down that

that rosy cheek

you may not acknowledge the fact that I know just about everything

everything about you 

but every aspect of your being is in correlation with my soul 

or that staring at you gives me total utility 

or that the manner in which you arch your delicate back as the sun and moon collide commands the birds to sing so beautifully

You're my obsession

you're that person 

the person I wish really existed

Reviews

[The Verse: A Poetry Jou..]

Oh, I'm so sorry but I like your writing so I'm gonna have to be honest, "rosy cheeks" not the 19th century. we must omit such phrases. Also you are a wonderful write, perhaps editing your work to give it more structure and strength, developing a tone would be excellent. As oppose to such free, free-verse, your writing is not free enough.

Example:

You're my obsession,
The tingling sensation you give me,
When you crinkle your nose--

And so on, just a bit of editing will do justice to your work.

[Sasha-lee]

appreciate the honesty

[Vani Jalagar]

For many people, one of the most frustrating aspects of life is not being able to understand other people's behavior........