"He", A Sonnet

Q. 1
He, robust in nature and so divine
Unequivocally concise, and so;
His mind, a brutal, violent dark line
His heart, a fine stream amidst a meadow.

Q. 2
Hollow chest and ghastly remains abuse
Oh, much to his despair he cannot find
Lips of alabaster, afraid to lose
Things he grasps and remains he can’t define.

Q. 3
Oh, genteel man and owner of my heart
See you not, the world and as it is so?
Creating monsters through passion and art
Release the Dragon and defeat this foe!

Couplet:
For many a night my heart yearns for you,
And my eyes, focused, I bid you, Adieu.

Reviews

[Giulia King]

Right choice of words indeed. I like it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts. I liked the feel of ancient writer and honest story in the poetry. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Paul]

Well written with such a nice flow to it. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing!

[JoeO]

Going from physical to psychical describers gets a little choppy. The accented beats are all but missing as well. I think you've captured something by the tail here...

[Joey Nizz]

I like how the words waved in each sentence, great choice of words and well written.
Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I loved the flow and the rhythm. Beautifully written with right choice of words.

[Isabella Ivy]

This is exquisite! I'm so impressed :) Grand work. Thank you for the read request. Isabella :)

[wordman]

lovely thoughts , i guess i liked question 3
well written

[Stacy Purvis]

They are Quatrains, dearheart : )

[wordman]

well you know i am dumber than hell..right !

[Stacy Purvis]

Lol! Stop it, you sillybutt 😂