End Of The Beginning

Dead.
You're Dead to me
Like the Death you await
The Darkness in your Soul
Empty carcass on the Cold,
Hard ground, Lost not Found
Much like this Slap of Reality
In Your face
Dead.

Reviews

[Rhayne]

Ouch. I pity the next poor person that meets that character. They're obviously not worth the time put into a relationship. Sorry for the recipient's woes and glad they could just say 'good riddance'.

[Stacy Purvis]

I was channeling someone’s bitter outrage. 😂😂😂 Sorry...damn, it’s good though.

[Einstein Noodle]

wow ... each line a strong straight right to the gut ...this is a relationship unbalanced .. when one gives all and the other takes with disregard ... to ignite such a powerful response ... the closing is so final ..no glimmer of the protagonist finding peace yet ... but i am the obstinate optimist ... this fiery anger will abate .. one can let it go and move on ... its a choice after a point i think .. once that fire dims a bit ;)what a scene and inspired setting .. your open endedness in that let me put her in a place of my own imaginations ... but her soliloquy is crystal clear .. whew .. glad it not me she speaks of :}
E.

[Chris]

Just a hint of anger here... I do hope the "cause" justifies the resultant 'tudes. Wasting a good anger is a terrible thing.

[john l smith]

Sounds like a romance ended poorly
Unfortunately, not a rare occurrence