Shooting Star

~I'm a Shooting Star~

Tonight I'm just a brilliant light,

Traveling across the sky,

Soaring down that horizon line,

Heaven and Earth collide.

 

Right now I am the very thing,

Halo and hands of dust,

Flying past with a rainbow tail,

In me, confide and trust.

 

I fly across our dazzling sky,

Hear words whispered to me,

Every wish that's wished upon me,

I grant, unyieldingly.

 

My powers only go so far,

My eyes, so far, can see,

But don't lose hope, and don't forget,

I'll love as you love me.

 

Tonight I am a shooting star,

Flying both far and wide,

When I'll come down, I have no clue,

Forever by His side.

Author's Note

Turned into a more religious concept.

Reviews

[Coinneach MacAnraoi]

Excellent way of showing the excitement and purity of young love. You are a very good poet. Keep it up!

[Sapphire Dreams]

wonderful poem, i could feel the empowered sensation conveyed in the piece.
you have talent.

[deeps]

Awe this is so sweet and wonderful,
such a lovely write.

[roy mccarthy]

awesome write!
i bet he loved it!