Let my soul cry

have you ever cried of happyness?...

Let my soul cry

Till I see on you a lush face.

Let my tears reflex that peace,

‘Cause waves stopped spanking

 

‘Cause days I’ve counted,

They began to cease,

And the country flowers,

beautifully began to sprout.

 

Cause in my prayers,

A savior voice heard me,

Who returned a favor

only for love.

Reviews

[Pax]

have you ever cried of happiness?...

I guess I haven't yet. In time, someday in the future - the time that I found the one that will truly will stay at heart.

I see faith, love and happiness in this piece. Love can do bring happiness.
Beautifully crafted.

[Fernando Dardón]

you don't necesarily need to cry for a girl. You can cry for any happy situation. CR7 is a clear example of that LOL >xD

[Fernando Dardón]

thank you very much for the review by the way!!!

[Shaquana Adams]

Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing :)

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)..............

[Fernando Dardón]

Thank you, for reviewing. Im glad youuve liked it :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You are welcome...:)...................

I love this poem to heart bro, you have a southern heart, that fills the ink of a poet a poet should be like....

Truly felt, these words, embraced, and it shows faith, love, hope and happiness.... even trust....
It has your Guata heart in shining rays.

- Elisa