Define Me

Define Me

Define me through your eyes

Through the flaws

And imperfections you see

Define me in time

Through your past

And my present

Define me in wisdom and age

You that must know more

And I who must learn

Define Me

Like you are the mirror

And i'm this thing needing fixed

A cracked body

A broken Soul

Can you really define me?

Reviews

[Anita Singh]

Great work! It is great to know oneself through others eyes. What they think of us. Cause we cannot define ourselves perfectly. It is a great thought. :)

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you!

[Hope]

Your poems are undoubtedly so deep ...again ..another of you marvellous works !

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you!

[Hope]

You are welcome ! :)

[FlamingPhoenix]

Nice work! I don't think anyone can define anyone else because only you reside in your own skin.

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you. I agree but the world is full of defining one another and everything whether we mean to or not. "Judgement is no longer unfair, but what we learn to see" Taken from: What are you so scared of? By: Tonight Alive ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ip6ex1vqf6I )

[MARK JOHN JUNOR]

wonderful piece....sublime

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed the read.

[Sami Khalil]

"Define me in wisdom and age

You that must know more

And I who must learn




Define Me

Like you are the mirror"

[A. Amos]

I feel your words as the best part of reading your work is, as you know how to get your reader connected with your craft, you truly are stylish writer my friend

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you for your kind words! I am glad you like it. :)

[A. Amos]

you're most welcome

[winteroo]

Nice words, I like it. There are a lot of things yet to be understood in life.

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you! I agree.

[Sami Khalil]

Define flaws, mirror love, learn repair...Bravo...................

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

Youre welcome...:)...............