Bigger Pictures

Seeing bigger pictures and the human effect.

Bigger Pictures

"Just stop. Relax."

He said

But I can't

I am too close to it all

I see

Bigger pictures

Every side

All emotions

Trying to find the humane

What are we

But bodies of souls

Calling us human

Nervous

Complex

Strangers to ourselves

Brightest of days

Darkness in nights

How do we define human

Understanding worlds

Understanding people

Trying to understand the "me"

"Just stop. Relax."

He said

But I can't

When stories are left untold

Emotions unseen, left to dust

And reason is left to power

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

maybe that is why it is so hard for me to relax...there is too much left to understand...too much undone and untold...too much to do...
is that a poet's life?

to define human?

such an insightful piece of writing, that raises many questions for the reader to ponder.

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you! Maybe it is the poet's life. I am glad you enjoyed it! :)

[Kamari's]

A great thought very raw in the inside conflicts well structured and great spacing bravo

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you!

[Kamari's]

Anytime maybe if you are also a strong imagery writer I have contest for the best imagery piece you write well perhaps I'll see one of your pieces in the contest

[Savannah Bly]

What is the title of the contest?

[Kamari's]

Imagery is the name of the contest by yours truely

[Matilda]

I think we can never just stop and relax. Anxiety and curiosity is what feeds us, I think. This poem represent, in a way, that hunger we have for knowing everything. Thought it was very refreshing :)

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you so much! I am glad you like it!

[FlamingPhoenix]

Profound. Nice write. Good job.

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you!

[New Theory]

Nice thought provoking poem :)

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you so much!

[New Theory]

you are welcome :)

[A. Amos]

Simply splendid, enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you, my friend, for your kind words!