Thoughts Confined Inside

Silence is golden. In lines and confusing metaphors.

Thoughts Confined Inside

I speak too much

In lines and confusing metaphors

My silence I should tightly clutch

And watch you smile, as you confine my thoughts deep inside---

And slam shut the doors

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I speak too much
In lines and confusing metaphors
My silence I should tightly clutch
And watch you smile, as you confine my thoughts deep inside---
And slam shut the doors"

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful poem on confining our thoughts and to who we should share the confiding ones...Excellent...:)...........

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you so much Sami! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[melissa]

Amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you!

[melissa]

You're welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oooh i like this...i shouldn't have to say anything at all...i don't need to speak...my thoughts should be locked deep inside you without me penning them or verbalizing them...we are one.

and maybe words just do confuse the issue.

[Savannah Bly]

Wow, I agree. Nicely put and thanks for the review Jacob! :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

Silence can, indeed, be just as beautiful and timely as a well chosen metaphor....for silence speaks just as loudly (sometimes louder) than words. Beautiful, insightful write, dear Savannah!

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you! :)

[FlamingPhoenix]

Oh how I feel this one currently. One must choose carefully with whom to not share thoughts and feelings--just as long as one also chooses someone within whom to confide. Very well done!

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you so much! :)