Zzzzzzz

Zzzzzzz

A Poem by SavyNess
"

and while tiny eyes rest, father time will test

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Sleep makes even a criminal innocent for the moment
A man without sleep can be up to no good
While tiny eyes rest
Father time will test
Imaginations run wild; mindset like a child
Restless nights; mental fights; vivid sights
Mental scrutiny is relentless
Second guessing is endless

© 2015 SavyNess


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'Zzzzzzzz' is a good poem, SavyNess, and the words you write are creative. Danger is contagious when a man never dreams. The last line of your poem, "Second guessing is endless," is a good line to leave the reader to wonder (in my opinion). Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 22, 2015
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